Eliza Doolittle music video - Evaluation

This is my groups evaluation of our practise music video. We decided to use a picture on picture so that people could see the music video as we were talking. Some of the points we included was what we went well and what we think we could improve. Although the evaluation over ran a little, we did include a lot of points such as we need to be aware of things in the background and also the fact that i was chewing gum which is something i wont do it in the real thing, but at the time i completely forgot about it. Things we liked included the start when there was lots of different angles of me walking downstairs and also the recurring stairs theme of me leaving to go to University as the narrative. Overall i think the evaluation went well and was detailed which is what we will make sure we do in the real thing as well.